Club Penguin released a new Reviewed By You. Last week they wanted to know who you’d go on an adventure with and where. The winner was Chubby The P (lol… funny name! Luv it!), and he/she said:
If I could go on an adventure, I would go with my mermaid friends under the sea! We would swim through forests of seaweed, discover lost treasures, and collect glittering shells! We would go in search for a sunken ship, and bring back pearls, diamonds, and coral! We would swim with colorful fishes, and jump in the sparkling waves with the dolphins. And when we were tired, we would go have a picnic of seaweed rolls and sand cake under the waterfall!
You know what really annoys me about the Reviewed By You answers? Some of those penguins have really bad grammar, and CP doesn’t fix it. But this time the grammar and spelling was good, and I wasn’t bothered to death!! I think I’d be a good editor. I get mad when I see bad grammar, and I guess that’s an editor sign….
Anyway!

This week Club Penguin wants to know what you would do if you could hang with Rockhopper for one precious day. Now THAT’S what I call a writing theme! I think this is one of Club Penguin’s best so far! I entered. Did you guys enter, too?
This was Birdygurl, signing off.

















